I really love how Marc is coloring these night scenes. I’d have probably (stupidly) used black. Marc is smarter than me.

I appreciate all the great comments about how much (in general) you’re enjoying this latest chapter. It’s far and away the longest one yet and that’s very much on purpose, but it can strain a reader’s patience if not done properly. I’m telling the story I want to tell, but you do have some influence over the way I tell it and all the great comments Marc and I have gotten lately are encouraging. Thank you!