And suppose he’s still there when Vanessa walks out of the shower? What a nice impression that’s gonna make, especially stinking of beer and in his stained underwear.

I’m really concerned for Captain right now with his emotional state. I had forgotten about his invisibility and here we find that he has stood there in the room the whole time allowing himself to be emotionally beat down like that, as if he feels he deserves this pain.

Well, Brock. I finally got one right. What do you think of that? Ha. Ha ha! lawls

Although, honestly, I didn’t think Cap had any reason to grab the bear. I thought he accidentally bumped into it or flicked it because of what Spy Gal said. I think of Cap the same as before, except less harsh. Although there were times I forgot how much he must be hurting because he lost his son. Puts Spy Gal into harsher light. I love how, just like in real life, your forcing the reader to view reality in ways that they do not understand until, come later, it is approached at a different view or perspective and things come to light. Originally Cap seemed to offend, now Spy Gal. At first we had sorrow for Vanessa, now for Wilbur.

Also, if Jerry doesn’t change, this marriage could crumble sooner than Jerry expects. Jerry wanted her and he got her. Now if he can’t learn to love her truly by putting her first and thinking about her, the marriage will be hollow and devoid of any real meaning. At one point, I wonder, will Jerry finally bridge the gap – or realize he must bridge it because he had not yet attained to the other side – from selfish lust (all about putting him first) to selfless love (all about putting her first)?